Some people say a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While a group of people argue that children’s upbringing has a great impact on their future prosperity, I would assert that there are more important parameters that influence a person’s success or failure in their adult life.
There are a variety of reasons why I would argue that not only the way that children are brought up, but also their attitude toward life can change the quality of their life. Firstly, there are many successful people all over the globe who had a poor childhood background. Although they did not have a stable upbringing, they could achieve their goals by working hard. These people persevered and find appropriate role models who could help them become successful people. A salient example of this is Bill Gates who is the owner of Microsoft Company and as a child he had to solve many difficulties such as living with his step-father and tolerating the poor economy of the family. Secondly, the successful individuals have a positive outlook on life which leads to happiness and great achievements in their lives.
On the other hand, the importance of a standard nurture should not be neglected. It is proved that children who live in families that are stable are more likely to be successful in the future. These people grow up in peaceful environment which help them to concentrate on their education. They learn some important aspects such as morality; furthermore, they are more confident as well as enjoying their self-esteem in their adult life.
In conclusion, not only a stable training, but also the individual’s attitude toward life can have a brilliant effect on fellow’s prosperity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10332103321 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93802953319 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2005178879 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286111107338 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09639813183 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671771126952 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16974265495 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053421927048 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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