Some people think that an advertising on TV is useless and others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The Advertisement industry has a pivotal role to play in today’s marketing industry. Many companies boost their sales with the right and on point advertisement. However, it is believed by some people that the ad agencies are good for nothing, whereas, the opposing group assert vice versa. I shall discuss both perspectives in detail before reaching a conclusive decision.
To begin with, there are numerous merits of an advertisement on TV. Predominantly, in many countries people’s purchasing power has strengthened owing to the impactful advertisements. The communication of the right product to the segmented audience is quite useful, particularly for the consumers, to bring efficiency in their normal life. For instance, I personally bought a fruit cutter by following an ad on tv, that product has helped me save my time in the kitchen.
On the contrary, the advertisement industry has also adversely affected our lives in some cases. The ad agencies are producing meaningless and irrelevantly appealing ads of different products that negatively impact consumer’s mind and lead them buy a useless product. Thus, this approach motivates rubbish purchase that leads to a burden on consumer’s pocket. The evident example is the advertisement about skin brightening creams that misguide the customers. Furthermore, the clothing industry that has surge their product prices but advertises their articles so immaculately that customers tend to buy that expensive item unwillingly.
To recapitulate, In my opinion, advertisement industry should justify their role in influencing consumer buying behavior rightfully, not focusing on meeting the revenue targets only. I reiterate that the advertising industry is essential for many marketing companies survival; but from a consumer perspective, meaningful and useful advertisement is advised.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'surged'.
Suggestion: surged
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, in some cases, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76811594203 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38697388571 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1745949422 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165040851676 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547822987123 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439205042452 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970749418382 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180663174326 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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