Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by some individuals that every college student should have freedom in learning subjects. Whereas, others do not agree and believe that focus should be on valuable subjects such as science and technology only. Before reaching to a conclusion, this essay will discuss both the views.
To begin with, students must have freedom in studies as every students is not same In terms of interest and intellectual ability, therefore studies should be given independence in choosing subjects of their interest. Studying academics according to the students will are more fruitful, as they will contribute in society after learning willingly. A recent survey from American organization has revealed that students own interest in learning can produce more output as compared with students persuade to study limited subjects only. Therefore, students must have free choice to study subjects.
However, studying science and technology has always benefited society in a number of ways. Doctors, engineers and scientists are always needed in society in order to benefit human kind. Therefore we should encourage students to study. More science students means more number of doctors and engineers and with the rising population of humans, these experts are always deficient in quantity to cater community. A survey from World Health Organization has revealed that 1 doctor is required against the population of 4 people in order to have fit people in society.
To conclude, although science experts are much in demand as compared with other fields, I believe forcing students to study specific subject can impact negatively on students learning capacity and students may not be able to give out full dedication towards learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42222222222 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68256577218 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.260475937 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31422487962 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110415132908 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633421067256 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193628068343 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617436040834 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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