Some people think that the government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to some living healthy lifestyle is the responsibility of the individual, whereas others argue that the government should maintain appropriate healthcare facilities for citizens.
Firstly, having a prosperous health is up to the determination and habit of the individual which should be imbibed with discipline. The regime can provide better healthcare facilities such as a gym or a park throughout the country, however, if people are not going to use it then the government can do nothing about it. Therefore, it is a choice which we all can make regardless of our social and economic status. People from different race and religion can come forward and pledge to live active and healthy life.
On the other hand, there is no denying the fact that government has a very significant and important role to play in creating a healthy nation. The policies and programs by the government will improve awareness in many and enforce them to join healthcare programs. For example, some countries’ government have come up with the wonderful idea of fitness schools, yoga centers to educate people about benefits of an active lifestyle. Additionally, they are offering a discount on health insurance to people who live a healthy life. Thus, it is inevitable that government’s role is as important as the Sun to the Earth.
Considering above viewpoints, I believe a healthy lifestyle is a combination of people’s habit and the government’s initiatives and policies. One has to take ownership of his or her health else the regime's effort will be futile.
To conclude, a healthy lifestyle leads to a better and bright future. The general public can take benefits from the government’s healthcare program to rise and shine.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regimes'' or 'regime's'?
Suggestion: regimes'; regime's
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25622775801 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22845437367 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4828532227 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218793977021 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729007010138 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057879765349 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13216752481 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610558326719 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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