Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others,
however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued by some that it is better to provide education to young males and females in different schools, while others say it is far beneficial for both genders if they are educated in the same school. Although, studying in separate schools makes them to focus on studies, however, I believe studying together in same school will make them learn cooperation.
On the one hand, boys and girls study in different school to concentrate better on studies. This is because their aim is to rank higher and compete between students. Nowadays, there is a trend to beautify yourself and attract opposite sex, here they do not have a chance to socialize or enjoy, which eventually leaves them to focus on studies. For instance, as per a survey conducted by Times of India, it was disclosed that the passing rate of single gender schools is 100 percent when compared to mixed schools. However, I believe this does not give overall experience to oneself; they cannot learn and share the vital academics knowledge among the opposite sex.
On the other hand, when children study in the mixed sex school they learn to cooperate with each other in order to achieve success in academics. This means, they respect other gender, they are extremely comfortable to share their thoughts which eventually helps to align their understanding towards studies. For example, as per a survey conducted by Indian education department, it was disclosed that the students who are graduated from mixed gender universities have better understanding and communication skills, which helps to achieve good grades in annual examination. However, I believe two minds are better than one, especially opposite sex.
To conclude, some say young men and women should be studying in separate schools, however, other say that both genders should study in same school. Studying in different schools will be providing good scores in academics, however, I believe boys and girls should be educating in same schools because this will help them to understand each other and achieve success in academics
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 622, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'academics'' or 'academic's'?
Suggestion: academics'; academic's
...; they cannot learn and share the vital academics knowledge among the opposite sex. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12721893491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63519133939 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0874811884 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174699820661 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068809304495 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523859337278 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118279768338 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286364057168 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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