Some people think that it is important to spend a lot of money on a wedding celebration while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Trend is changing. Now a days, everyone wants to celebrate the wedding like celebrities.
Some people think that we should not waste money on the marriage parties while some people think the other way. In the essay, I am going to discuss both the vires and provide my personal opinion which is with the earlier one.
Some people considered wedding as a status symbol and want to show all the power and influence they have by spending a lot of money on the wedding menu, venue and guests. For example, they have the special locations for the marriage. Marriage is considered as a social responsibility for them which they have to fulfil lavishly. It is once in lifetime opportunity for them and they want to show the world how happy they are by celebrating this occasion as the best.
On the other hand, few people consider marriage as a private ceremony and would like to celebrate with the loved ones. For example, a decent celebration with friends and families. The savings from the marriage are being used in a positive way such as investing in their future or help someone who is in need. Moreover, they also like to spend this money on the time spent after the marriage.
In conclusion, different people have different perspective for the marriage. Marriage, the new beginning, can be celebrated by either way as it should be the choice for couples who are getting married. As long as they both agree on how the want to let the world know.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Trend is changing. Now a days, everyone wants to celebrate the weddin...
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Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Trend is changing. Now a days, everyone wants to celebrate the weddin...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...o discuss both the vires and provide my personal opinion which is with the earlier one. Some ...
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Line 6, column 227, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...avings from the marriage are being used in a positive way such as investing in their future or he...
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Line 8, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ce for couples who are getting married. As long as they both agree on how the want...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69140625 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50915985515 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1438046277 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23842300986 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736181155397 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863824179579 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135841798027 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952330511121 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.