Some people think sport play an important role in society, however, others think it is just a leisure activity. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Although sport has participated in various aspects of human daily lives, some people consider it as just an activity for recreation. In my opinion, everyone have their own arguments that are fit for specific individuals and I would like to analysis this issue in more detail.
On the one hand, sport plays a crucial role to people earning money from it. For example, not only professional athletes attach their lives to sport but also young people who have a great passion and enthusiasm for it. Furthermore, positive effects toward health problems such as diabetes, heart attack, obese brought by playing sport are cannot be denied. Continuously playing sport is proved to be beneficial for health by enhancing blood cycle, improving respiratory ability and stimulating digestive system.
On the other hand, according to a group of people, especially the young, sport is nothing but a kind of entertainment. In other words, they have a plenty of habits, one of which is playing sport. It means that sport do not has significant involvement in their routines. However, based on wonderful benefits sport creates for human health, there will be a moment that they realize how much they need to exercise when their body become exhausted.
Last but not least, the majority of people do not recognize the essential role of playing sport to their lives, so sport is supposed to be a leisure-time activity. Therefore, in order to create a sustainable development, people must change their thoughts and spend more time on playing sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75394538209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8781420129 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216149277233 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857860719861 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514659173429 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133726541282 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288274414971 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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