Some people think that there should be strict control about noise, others think that they could just make as much as noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Noise pollution has been a hot topic that has drawn widespread concern. Although there are obvious demerits for its effects, there are, indeed, commendable positive aspects as well, which is why people stand in their separate grounds for some in the support and others to restrict this phenomenon.
People belonging to that class which suggests one should have the liberty to let their voices and sounds be heard by all is mainly because they believe it as their freedom of expression and a means of stress relief, besides making their auspicious events captivating. Studies have shown that people feel better off while after being spoken aloud, it is backed by the scientific theory outlining how producing a high-pitched voice can ease a person's anxiety and depression to real extents. Although this creates exasperation for people in the near vicinity, many employers do apply this to their employees in the work environment not just for stress relief but for also the added advantage of boosting their work output. In addition, because humans have their basic instinct for attention-seeking while hosting for parties, loud music is often always the preferred choice, as it will draw the attention of the like-minded and hence resulting in their participation too; thereby, multiplying their amusements with more people.
On the contrary, since the outcome of one's self-centered actions are becoming a menace to a third person, many people stand against the practices of producing loud and uncomfortable noises. For example, the infants and the elderly find it exceptionally distressful to have their much-required relaxation of a sound sleep when subjected to thunderous noises in their background. Besides public nuisance, had restrictions were imposed on unfitting sounds it would have created a more favourable condition to enhance creativity for many knowledge seekers. For instance, many high schoolers reported that they find it easier to think clearly in surroundings which are serene and isolated from any loud commotion.
In conclusion, considering the differential opinion of both these classes, for some noise is a way of expressing oneself to relieve tension and an unavoidable by-product of many enjoyments, while for others it is an interruption to normal life and hinders creativity. In virtue of these conflicting views, I suggest, it would be a rather better option for all if the effective area of noise were confined within a minimal sector than to annoy by encroaching into others private space. And, it would only be wise to bring the needed legislation in place to curtail the public inconveniences of disturbing noises.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...oducing a high-pitched voice can ease a persons anxiety and depression to real extents....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30878859857 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93594577453 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605700712589 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1338743159 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.923076923 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3846153846 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127962511405 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454053107297 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320365872868 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769310684014 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132194732006 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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