Some people think they have a right to use as much freshwater as they want. Other believe Governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days there is a school of thought with a view that freshwater usage should be controlled tightly as it may become scarce resource. However, on contrary there are people who think it as their right to use fresh-water in abundance. Both views have their arguments in favor as well as against, in following lines we will be discussing the same.
Today we live a in a world of abundance of natural resources. As science has made progress with leaps and bounds, there are still some resources which are considered to be limited such as water, oil and other minerals. I am a strong believer of the view that there are enough natural resources in the world for everyone, however, better management of these resources is essentially required. Same is the case with water, where world need Dams and Artificial lakes/reservoirs to store water and to control the wastage of this essential resource. For instance, we are facing a threat of running out of usable water resources in the countries like Pakistan as we don't see due emphasis on building dams and other water reservoirs. Some cities of SouthAfrica has already ran our of usable water recently.
On the other hand there is a school of thought which believe that it is their right to use as much water as they want. Which in my view is a wrong approach to any natural resource as it will result in shortage of fresh water where governments are not doing due diligence to manage one of the most important natural resource such as water. If we look at the countries like USA and India, there the governments are investing plethora of funds on building water storage, still this thinking would damage these efforts.
You may see a lot of resources to store water in some countries, but still this doesn't mean that resource like water can be wasted. Governments must take necessary actions to manager resources in a better way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still, well, for instance, in short, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6278648569 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515243902439 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8216420029 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289570991636 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101118157319 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856133596731 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176728021341 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881755369187 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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