Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people,while others believe one can get any information or advice from the internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Life is full of uncertainties. People deal with different kind of situations every now and then. There are various sources to get knowledge or guidance such as internet, books or people. I will discuss benefits of both one by one in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are umpteen reasons why seeking advice from people is considered beneficial. First and the foremost is, one can easily rely on the information provided by people. For instance, no other source other than a person already employed in a company can give a better information about the company. Apart from this,grey-hair people are the best sources to attain knowlegde or advice to deal with any real life situation as they have gone through ups and downs in their lives. They are also called pillars of society as they pass on traditions and cultures to next generation and also lend a helping hand in connecting people with their roots. To epitomise , old people aware young people about their origin by providing crucial knowlegde that may not be available on internet or books.
On the flip side, some people believe that getting information from internet has become a cake walk. To illustrate , one can get any kind of data with a single click. Furthermore, books are considered greatest source of knowledge as numerous books are available for people of all ages. It provides accurate factual data such as information related to geographical areas. Internet has made gathering knowkegde about world a piece of cake . In addition, it is very helpful for tourists to choose destination and accommodation of their internet. For example, websites are available to inform facilities about hotels.
To recapitulate, I reckon that it depends on the type of information or advice one needs to get whether it is personal or professional. Therefore, both the experienced people as well as books and internet are equally assets for people in their own ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... deal with different kind of situations every now and then. There are various sources to get knowl...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , grey-hair
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...et has become a cake walk. To illustrate , one can get any kind of data with a sin...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'considered the greatest'.
Suggestion: considered the greatest
... a single click. Furthermore, books are considered greatest source of knowledge as numerous books a...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng knowkegde about world a piece of cake . In addition, it is very helpful for tou...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... Therefore, both the experienced people as well as books and internet are equally assets f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.065625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82612856308 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4927040862 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3157894737 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308460140571 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902857822284 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077718504066 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181882510863 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276031582445 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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