Sports stars are paid too much for what they do. Discuss.
sports players’ wages have become a contentious topic these days. since some people claim that their contributions to society are not matched their huge income. However, other individuals believe that they deserve their salaries due to the outstanding efforts, talents and inspiration. this essay aims to discuss both views in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To start with, sports players who have extraordinary skills which positively impact on the general public, might deserve such amounts of investments for several reasons. First of all, it’s irrefutable that most of famous stars such as Messi in Barcelona, Ronaldo in Juventas and Moh.Salah in Liverpool were getting through various challenges and obstacles and working very hard to prove their remarkable skills, thus, they deserve to being recognized financially or through the media in order to inspire other people to follow the same success path. Moreover, lots of athletes put their lives on extremely risk to satisfying the audience. For example, car racing is considered as one of the most dangerous sports worldwide. since the drivers might be harmfully affected during the performance and this might cost them a chunk of money for treatment.
On the flip side, sports players’ contributions to the global community are not matching their huge income, so, they do not deserve that much of funding. Firstly, their enormous amount of investments might be more effective if it’s directed to the needed people and societies. For instance, numerous nations in Africa suffer from many fatal diseases and low literacy rate due to poor infrastructure in most of their amenities. thus, investing in their nations might be more useful. Secondly, sports players’ wages influence on the price tickets of certain matches since their clubs increase the seat’ value to pay for their players. Take the well-known Classico football matches between Real Madrid and Barcelona as an example the tickets are exorbitantly high and unaffordable for many people due to the players value.
To sum up, sports players’ salaries have become a debate topic between people, as, some of them believe that sports players get through many obstacles and deserve such investments while others think that these investments might be more useful if it’s applied to the correct places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sports
sports players' wages have become a conte...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
... become a contentious topic these days. since some people claim that their contributi...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... become a contentious topic these days. since some people claim that their contributi...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...nding efforts, talents and inspiration. this essay aims to discuss both views in fur...
^^^^
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...y skills which positively impact on the general public, might deserve such amounts of investme...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Salah
... Barcelona, Ronaldo in Juventas and Moh.Salah in Liverpool were getting through vario...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 730, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...of the most dangerous sports worldwide. since the drivers might be harmfully affected...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 438, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...rastructure in most of their amenities. thus, investing in their nations might be mo...
^^^^
Line 13, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t's applied to the correct places.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46756756757 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77877928541 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57027027027 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4253213142 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4375 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146331399792 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498775928062 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446567085241 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087417711233 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271292886967 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.