There is a general belief that wealth and material belongings are the key criteria when it comes to success; whereas I am of the opinion that there are not the only factors to make a successful person as there are a variety of measurements to be considered such as family, career and health.
It is undeniable that in the era in which everyone strives for happiness and comprehensive lives, finding a way to define success is vitally important. However, being wealthy and possessing luxurious properties cannot be the best measure of success. For instance, a successful entrepreneur might have a lot of money to buy anything he attempts but they may always be under a lot of pressure or struggle with family problems which make they unsatisfied and exhausted. So this case exemplifies why wealth can not be regarded as an indicator of success.
There are several factors that contribute to a successful person. Firstly, it is commonly acknowledged that family is paramount important to our lives. As the family is always mental support whenever they succeed or fail, family always be there and it is a motivation for every people to make an effort to succeed in their life. Secondly, having a stable job that suitable to your interest and ability also leads to a successful and happy life. Finally, obviously, good health conditions are an essential trait which helps you overcome obstacles in life and achieve extraordinary results as only if you have health, you can have the energy to work hard and gain success.
In conclusion, there are various factors that result in success but not only being wealth and having a high number of materialistic things. A person can be considered a success if they have other criteria in terms of family relationships, career and good health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93687707641 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83324238149 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3929893456 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332957359625 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13356493448 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932698579733 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231728706882 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803699601607 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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