Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?
In today's world, due to convenient means of transport, any item could reach easily far distances from its origin. In this essay, I will talk about why importing food is important and its positive and negative outcomes.
There are a certain number of reasons to import and trade food from one country to another country. The first prominent reason is the lack of food in some regions, for example, In India, apple grows in mountains which is not available in countries in Saudi Arabia, Dubai, and UAE. And, we need to eat every healthy food product even it is fruit to keep a good appetite and diet. Thus, apples are imported through shipping to the middle-east countries in the form of international trading. Moreover, food trading is also helpful to outweigh the hunger in poor countries by making donations to unfortunate people who cannot grow vegetables and fruits in their areas.
Furthermore, importing food is useful as people can visit other parts of the world and they will deal with the different cultures, traditions, and learn new languages. To exemplify, my uncle is a farmer and he grows rice in our agricultural land, and he has to visit middle-east regions to export rice, due to this, he started speaking the Urdu language fluently and learned a lot about Muslim culture and foods. Therefore, I believe that it is a positive sign for building relationships with other countries by making international trades whether it is a food item.
Conversely, food transportation has drawbacks yet has many benefits. To begin with, high cost of transferring food from to far countries. For example, rice and flour are exported to Canada from India which makes the item more than twice costly as its original price. Secondly, Storage of food for a long period such as raw chicken, meat, and other food items like noodles are preserved and stored in refrigerators. The longer storage of food items makes a low quality of nutrients and unhealthy for individuals to consume. Lastly, encouraging local citizens to eat imported food rather than local food which will affect the economy of the country as people will demand more on the imported food and local farmers will not be able to survive easily in their regions.
To conclude, although importing food is necessary and important for all people around the world, I think that national leaders and farmers must innovate new ways to transfer food into poorer countries to decline the rate of hunger as well as should promote the importance of local food which is one of the freshly available eatable healthy product.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, i think, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65386979904 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552995391705 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5828429313 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.823529412 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5294117647 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165784858107 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06182950264 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047150134576 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105470789853 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562774361719 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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