Nowadays, every country on the earth is facing ecosystem related issues due to the exponential increase of travellers. This essay will discuss deforestion and pollution are the significant environment problems due to this trend and also suggest some viable solutions, such as strict action against illict infrastructure and improvement of public transport network.
Without question, the upsurge of visitors has aggravated various ecosystem concerns, but the most significant issues are the depletion of the forest land and rising air pollution levels. Tourism provides an opportunity for employment and business growth, especially in the hospitality sector. The illegal construction of hotels and restaurants are common in tourist destinations, thereby causing the eradication of forest land for the development of infrastructure. Consequently, this cutting down of plants and trees causes deforestation, which is one of the biggest challenges our ecological system is facing today. Moreover, the rise of air pollution levels has posed a threat to the environment in such places. Unarguably, the air quality has badly affected because of the excessive usage of private vehicles, which are causing increased emission of carbon dioxide gases, for taking visitors to these places. For instance, a survey conducted by the Himachal University reveals that the air quality index has reached its lowest point, due to the growth of tourism.
Admittedly, the above-referenced challenges exist; however, these issues can be resolved after adopting the following practical measures, namely taking action against illegal structures and better public transportation. To commence with, the government must issue an advisory to the unauthorized buildings and take stringent action against miscreants. The preservation of forest land is impossible until the government is not taking strict actions. Additionally, the betterment of the public transportation system is an effective solution to curb the menace of air pollution because it will reduce the role of private vehicles for commuting, which are responsible for causing air pollution to a large extent. For example, as per the reports published by the Transport Ministry of Himachal, the air quality of Himachal Pradesh has significantly improved after strengthening the state public transportation system.
In conclusion, every part of the world is affected by the various ecological problems due to the upsurge of tourists. The primary problems are deforestation and rising pollution levels, but these issues can be tackled by taking strict actions against illegitimate constructions and improving public transit networks.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80661577608 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17364110704 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5368956743 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8084254209 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.625 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106184336807 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361224774975 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390141233274 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763739500517 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531842671883 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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