As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Businesses have always sought to make an enormous profit, but someone believe that trades have various responsibilities to society. As a whole, I completely agree with this opinion.
Although the main goal of each business is blooming and making money especial for its owner and manager but its obligations to community shouldn’t be forgotten. One of the most important of them is that trade upholds the national economy. To dig a little deeper, business should increase the ratio of exporting to importing. For instance, waving carpet is one of this kind of trade which helps to increase the rate of exporting products so that it not only prevents from exiting of currency but also attract foreign currencies.
Another argument in favor of the commitments of businesses against society is reducing the rate of unemployed people and also class divided. I think that each new business should alure number of people to workplace depend on its size and inspire to them sense of satisfactory by giving various generous benefits during work time. It would definitely reduce the rate of crime special in inner area of city where number of unemployed is higher than other areas obviously. If I recall my memory, it has been around twenty years ago that my uncle had established his factory in outskirt of city and from that time he has been taking on staffs from local people who are living near to his factory. He has started his work by only twelve workers but now he is hiring more than two hundred labors. He is always trying to promote his employees whether in their salaries or in their positions which motivates the staffs to do their best. In another word, the spirit of competition and eventually the life expectancy factor is continuously increasing among them.
Inconclusion, it seems to me that the first point in establishing a business is considering its duties against society and national benefits which can be helping in financial subjects of psychological issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...to make an enormous profit, but someone believe that trades have various responsibiliti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98791540785 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73809698325 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601208459215 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3445272951 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146196086136 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463182648963 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574255083727 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994304576053 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076457245894 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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