What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
It is sayings that money is the greatest root of all the evil. Therefore, it is very important that one must not fall in the bad character and use money wisely. Though, money is not everything. There are certainly other things that also matters to spend better life.
First of all, people believe that money can be utilized in serving the humanity. There are many non-profit organization who help the homeless people or those people who starve to death. Additional contribution in terms of charity will support these underprivileged people and make their lives worth living. Also, spend money in underdeveloped countries like Pakistan who are depriving of education facilities and many students could not receive advance education due to financial crisis. These little efforts will count the most and make this world a better place to live.
In addition to that, investments can also be proved as better use of money. In some countries investors hardly entice themselves to invest in some business for several reasons. If more investors are interested to invest more money then this will help to produce more jobs for the people. For example, Uber is now operating worldwide and providing wide range of employment opportunity to feed the extra mouths of their families. Hence, more investors like this create more jobs opportunity.
However, experts believe that if you do not have many still then you are able to demonstrate a good life. Such as good character is widely as important as you spend money to make someone's life better. For instance, family guardians, who require full attention of their children that even a little negligence hurt them badly. They do not need money but need time. Therefore, it is very important that our uninfluential attitude must not be transferred to them. Little smiles make their day.
It is generally believed that if every rich person pay a small amount of contribution then half of this world will not sleep without having the meals. In a same way, a good gesture, will make someone's life brighter. Remember that there is always a silver linings behind the dark clouds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the bad character and use money wisely. Though, money is not everything. There are cer...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ors are interested to invest more money then this will help to produce more jobs for...
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Message: Consider replacing "In a same way" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ill not sleep without having the meals. In a same way, a good gesture, will make someones lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01983002833 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62082379184 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549575070822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3458497486 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0434782609 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.347826087 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52173913043 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152395148694 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044020586941 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406538627152 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853182134776 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567238582273 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.