When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration for many Others however prefer different ot0her aspects of a job over the salary they earn

Essay topics:

When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration for many. Others, however, prefer different ot0her aspects of a job over the salary they earn.

Life has many facets and having a good career is one of the most significant. What's a good job, though? That's a hard question to answer because in answering this question, each person has his or her perspective. Some people see a good job as having a good income, while others, apart from salary, consider many factors. In this article, we would address that the other considerations apart from salaries should be taken into account when choosing a work value

People are always looking for a career with a good pay to keep their lavish and cozy lifestyle. In fact, we conclude that a well-paying job is a sign of social success or high status. Citizens see a higher wage as an important aspect so that they can respond to the need for nutrition, clothes, schooling, medicine and so on partially or wholly in their families. Not only do most people stop at comforts and needs, they also want luxuries in life, therefore, higher remuneration becomes one of the most important factors in selecting a career.

On the other side, many employees who are willing to forego monetary benefits but cannot risk their peace of mind are inclined towards choosing jobs that provide a good culture and a positive environment A study of the researchers has shown that many people suffer from phrenic breakdown because of working day and night in the organisation with no breaks.

To sum up, I strongly agree that while choosing a career, people should not ignore the other considerations because they have a significant physical and mental impact on their lives

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Average: 8.6 (6 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in fact, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84962406015 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65272918512 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.1101548107 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195207391102 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728147003209 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035243886093 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102272743282 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412209805945 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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