Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and lesson their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Over the last decades, It is believed that more females are playing a vital role in terms of educating and nourishing their youngsters, while their husbands are breadwinners. This leads to the fact wives should concentrate on caring and teaching their offspring instead of pursuing their career path. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this statement due to it causes gender inequality.
On the one hand, it is demonstrated that both males and females have qualities which are the best efficient measures when it comes to children's education and tending. As a result, those skills facilitate both of them in childcare successfully, which means teaching and looking after their youngsters is not specific for the female role only. If more men are househusbands, the couples would reap certain benefits from this phenomenon. For the best, mothers not only have more time for their favors but also utilize the amount of free time to gain more qualifications which paves the way for their career path. Not to mention that, childcare help fathers to understand more about their children and tighten the relationship between themselves and their youngsters.
On the other hand, despite the obvious advantages of housewives, it will be not equal to females when blinding their responsibilities is only childcare. Firstly, there are a large variety of women who are senior managers in the areas of the employee when they pursue their Life-work. This change brings more merits than drawbacks due to the fact that possessing a job can help wives split heavy burden with their husbands as well as avoid financially dependent on their spouse. Secondly, the more jobs they do, the more incoming taxes they pay for their government, which means the states can allocate the national budget that obtained from this type of tax for other urgent issues such as education, health care, and infrastructure.
In summarize, it cannot be denied the fact that females are superior to caring offspring than males. However, I believe that women become breadwinners are an imperative trend of humankind. Thus, authorities should enact more effective policies in order to encourage women to make ends meet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19154929577 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79092814397 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0547321476 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.866666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261120490455 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843685082811 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423871096899 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150668229814 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398419864927 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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