Write about the following topic.
The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The global computer networking based service has dramatically influenced the world in recent years. People can easily acquire data within a fraction of time through this medium. Although I agree that retrieving information via the internet has drastically been improved, it has detrimental impacts too when unrestricted.
Time can be saved while using this service. For instance, people can easily now connect to their friends and family through web-based social networks. Similarly, mail can rapidly be transmitted when it is sent electronically. An individual can purchase products online to retain precious hours. Apart from this, it may be useful to obtain a lot of articles regarding any particular topic. Even more, people can instantly be updated with recent stories, breaking news, and other materials from any corner of the earth where the internet is available.
While the Internet is widely utilized to make life much easier, it can negatively affect society if there is no regulation. Many people, for example, lose their opportunity to be socialized when they become obsessed with this technology. As a result, they isolate themselves from other people to pay further attention to the virtual world. Critically, it can intentionally be used to spread a rumor, criticism, hate speech, and also to commit several unwanted crimes.
Using the Internet is inevitable in many aspects of social situation, however unrestrained application of this modern invention can adversely affect the world. I strongly believe that people need to be conscious and knowledgeable to gain data through the Internet.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90705073915 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9634513503 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862792033712 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310670433276 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026687833956 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056141742918 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132388209212 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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