You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
The problems with garbage, sanitation and poor waste disposal management is a mundane problem globally. But, producing more and more rubbish is the current affair and on the main agenda for every government on this planet. Let us discuss further below:
Firstly, the reason for sky-rocketing piles of it is due to increased consumption. Everyone is purchasing more grocery stores output for their households and examples of this are packed food and water. Then, all items sold in the market like electronic gadgets, phones, kitchenware etc. are wrapped in harmful substances like polythene and carbon fibers which emits carbon radiation. Another important aspect of this growth is due to the industrial wastes from nuclear plants and oil productions. Of course, the inevitable culprit, 'Smoke' emitted from factory chimneys which consists of harmful gases. From the above, pollution increased and proved detrimental to mankind as chronic diseases rose due to chemical intoxication through food, water and air due to this situation.
Secondly, the governments always promoted and helped economies to achieve harmony and ecological balance by adopting sustainable renewable technologies by generating electricity through wind, water and solar means rather than traditional ways we have read from above. Moreover, the problem did not halt as citizens miscalculated to estimate the severe repercussions from abundant leftovers lying on the streets. So, the authorities had long ago started cleaning the streets, the sewage systems and transported the residual matter to treatment plants, where all the filth is purified to make major proportions of junk material reusable. We all have heard about recyclable paper and bottles right? This is the outcome of the arduous efforts put in by industrialists and environmental protection officers, that everything is recyclable now a days reducing hazards.
To conclude, people are requested to responsibly dispose at home to welcome a cleaner and greener future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 834, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...officers, that everything is recyclable now a days reducing hazards. To conclude, peopl...
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Line 5, column 838, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...cers, that everything is recyclable now a days reducing hazards. To conclude, peopl...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5868852459 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92056622387 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685245901639 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8515741382 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148974671227 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445104284492 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694187846781 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783435795328 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614051341639 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.