You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Nowadays the advertise is increasing drastically because of the television programs, computer, website and others types of technology. We live in a world which everyone is using electronics all the time from mobile phone and through that some companies are utilizing this for make some advertises in that way to achieve the goals and make everyone known about their company. I do not think that is wrong or right but I agree that some advertise can make we buy something that we do not need on this specific time and spend our economies in a product that is not going to help us in anything that moment. On the other hand I also agree that the advertisements can tell us more about the new products that can improve our knowledge and improve our lives.
My viewpoint about advertise is when the advertise is to help to improve our knowledge and not just to make us to buy the product is really interesting because we are not going to spend time watching something that not going to change our knowledge and even make us more intelligent. It is important that this advertise being true and fair with the person who are watching and make the people understand what they want. Making sure that the product is exactly what the customer is waiting to receiving when they buy as it is showing on advertising.
In my opinion both of the people are right once that the advertise encourage people to buy things that they do not need because they are impulsive to buy this product because they felt necessary to buy it when they watched the advertise and I also believe that the advertise show to us the new products of the market and about the technology that is really important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61204013378 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53574792937 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43143812709 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4489871024 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.375 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.375 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404048633582 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17853228921 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100513944603 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290960526122 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510605705343 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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