Young people have attitude and ideas different from that of their parents and grandparents.
How do these attitudes differ between young people and their parents and grandparents?
In your opinion, do you think it would cause problems?
With the advent of modernisation era, it revolutionised the human existence. No doubt, it is a mess benefits but along with this, it also generate a generation gap between old and young people. Today's young generation has disparity in thinking and dear from the former generation which I can portray in the subsequent paragraphs.
As far as my views are concerned, the pre-dominant reason is technology which is prevailing all over the world and create a craze in the young generation. The youngsters are technofeddy they preferred to use technological equipment in every aspect of life such as wiping out the house they use vacuum cleaners etcetera but in the passive time, people done this with their hand. Besides this, they are technofoby because they did not use this type of things in their former life and they are not habitual with these electrical equipment. Moreover, in the fast pace of life, it is not easy to earn the bread and butter, in the competitive era, people have hectic all days schedules which contains diligence. After a tireless day, it is not possible to cook the food due to this reason they prefer to eat fast food instead of consuming traditional food. Last but not least, there are a lot of differences between the dressing sense, because of the modernisation era, youngsters adopt the western culture and they prefer to Veer best addresses such as jeans, skirts but old people prefer to wear their own additional clothes such as salwar suits for girls as according to Punjabi tradition.
According to me, because of the disparity among older and young cause of plethora of problems, firstly, how the families are became nuclear family is people prefer to live separate from their parents when they get married, because the Thoughts can create disbutes and a lot of conflicts between them which cannot be carried easily. Do you to these reason they prefer to live in nuclear family is over the joint families, so they will disturb in their private life. Further more, because of the nuclear families, there is no one in their house who can look after their children and give them moral values due to this reason their children became manner less and they are deprived from the love of their grandparents.
In conclusion, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I cogitate that because of technology and modernisation, it creates a gap between parents and child which is grave concern today. People need to say the gravity of the problem and address before it gets to late.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tween old and young people. Todays young generation has disparity in thinking and...
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...s jeans, skirts but old people prefer to wear their own additional clothes such a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61233423855 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502304147465 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4785489995 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234355680807 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756288488694 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465291590498 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141178612488 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522562364063 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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