Young people spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre
Some people think young people spend more free time on cultural activities like music, film, and theatre. Other people believe that sports are better for young people. In my opinion, young people should do a mixture of both because each of them is a crucial part of our life.
Young people are in the gold age, so sports are suitable for them that help them relax and develop healthily. Equally, sports help young people improving many skills such as leadership, management, and communication skills. For example, in soccer, you need to communicate with other players and make a plant to score and lead them to victory. Moreover, play sports are less expensive compared to cultural activities. On the other hand, young people spend time with many activities: watch TV, listen to music, go to the theatre or play musical instruments,... These activities need more money, but cultural activities help people understanding many new trends, news in the world every day and change of other countries. Furthermore, cultural activities are good for their mind and spirit. Nowadays, many young people also concentrate play a sport or one activity not only they feel pressured but also their development is imbalanced and incomprehensive. In conclusion, I think young people should do a variety of activities and that a balance between sports and cultural activities is best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 555, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... the theatre or play musical instruments,... These activities need more money, but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13452914798 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79211277424 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565022421525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.274430884 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480798798791 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175497087592 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140690129528 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.413574347174 0.151304729494 273% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00586039520556 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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