20 years cars will be used less or more

Essay topics:

20 years cars will be used less or more.

I believe this statement is true in every that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. There are several reasons I support this statement are explained below.

To begin with, I see that world is changing gradually, people of this planet are aware of their environment and resources availability. As the cars run by a gas and that is nonrenewable and it is producing far less than earlier. Many people are aware of pollution icreases of every individual drives their own car, as people nowadays are very environment lover , there are higher probability that soon there will be less use of cars. I feel instead people will start using travel buses, this will consume time, money , environment. For example when I was in school, most of friends parent used to drop their child via car every day, not me but a large number of population. However so is not happening now , school provide a bus and students travel via bus as this is beneficial in many perspectives. So this is the change which I observe and feel this continuation will lead to less use of cars in upcoming years.

To carry on further , I feel apart of environment protection , this generation is not that much into cars, they prefer using bicycle and motorcycle. The reason behind this may be bikes are more convenient to use, like easy to park, easy to drive, low maintenance. The other reason i hold this opinion is, see, people nowadays lives in a nuclear family where only couple lives. So this condition they thought of buying vehicle that is less space occupying and money saving. One another change i observe is earlier there were taxi, only if single person has to travel but now there are bike taxi and i feel this is really amazing innovation.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, as to, for example, i feel, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67207792208 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53451105484 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.714597628 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277599697268 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984334632709 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986188791549 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192676354497 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680926060153 0.0645574589148 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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