A television is taken as a sole source of entertainment by most of the population. We watch television for global news updates which have made the world so small. In addition to that, we are entertained by movies, songs, drama, dances etc, broadcasted in television. Life has been so cosy and comfortable with the company of television. We do not feel alone at home when accompanied by by television. Although, there are plenty of positive sides of television, it does possesses negative influences to the people's behaviour and the society itself.
First, there are numerous fictional and reality based programs which are so influential that people start living their everyday life with such programs. They are so habituated to such programs that they cannot afford to miss a single episode. This makes them more adamant and they prefer living isolated with television by their side. Many feuds happen in the house just to watch one's favourite show. They are more irksome, aggressive and possessive regarding their respective shows. For an instance, children love cartoons and their father loves watching news. The time schedule for both happens to be on same time slot. They will not let their father win because they cannot miss to watch cartoon. So, by hook and crook, they will watch it. They may fight, shout loud, start crying, yelling, or anything they can do, they will watch it. This shows that how children are influenced and how stubborn they act to get the thing they want.
Second, violence in movies and television has made people resistant of watching such action. They are more prone to like such scene. They start being insensitive about the pain other are going through as they are so used to seeing it in television and movies. In the same way, the young people are highly influenced by movies. They feel like they are movie stars if involved in any fighting or scuffle. They are more prone to become violent and less practical watching such movies. They are chasing behind the fictional stories. Even love and romance shown in movies and television makes them believe that they can live such stories and make them more prodigal wasting in unwanted things.
Third, the empathetic nature of people makes them enjoy the situational songs. This triggers the emotional part in them where they can relate their life's situation with a particular song in a movie. Listening songs and watching videos soothe mind and provide entertainment. Even in every rituals and parties, songs are played from the movies to have more fun and enjoyment. Songs can be taken as the stress boosters. People behave to be more calm and relaxed while listening to the songs. Therefore, influence of television and movies can be seen through songs too.
In the conclusion, human' s behaviour is highly influenced by the environment around, self thought process, misinterpretation of other thought towards us and so on. We learn from what we see and experience so, it is solely on us to grasp positive influences and bury the negative ones. We have to understand that television and movies mean no harm to our living, they are for our entertainment. For informative and motivational shows, we have to grip tight the ideas that can be applied to lifetime goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: by
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd less practical watching such movies. They are chasing behind the fictional storie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, third, while, in addition, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2712.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 548.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94890510949 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59648384973 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507299270073 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 833.4 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6003584229 175% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3724514483 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119237279751 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343302033143 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402562625087 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742971220236 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207716521208 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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