Is the ability to communicate the most important trait for a politician or a leader? This is the most basic and most often-asked question about leadership. To cut to the chase, my answer is “Definitely no”.
Admittedly, a group of people contends that a leader with good communication skills can easily win people over because whatever information you are trying to tell them will get across without being misunderstood. Sure, making yourself clear is one of the most important skills you should have. But, is it the most important one?
In my opinion, there are other characteristics that play a more vital role in becoming a good politician or leader like decision-making ability and hard working.
First off, the ability to make decisions enables one to be distinguished from a leader to a follower. To be a extraordinary leader or politician, you have to make some crucial decisions under certain circumstances in order to make sure your company or your team grows in the right direction. Steve Jobs is a good case in point. Being a leader with a strong decision-making capability, Steve Jobs determine to use the special smartphone system called “IOS”,which is a system can highly protect customer’s privacy. It is a very fresh idea ,but it is this very important decision that helped Apple company experience a huge change from failure to success. You can easily see that most of people around you use iPhone nowadays.
What’s more, working hard is another core factor in determining a good leader or politician.It definitely nurtures hard working among employees and helps foster morale. If the leader can serve as a better example by working hard at everyday work, chances are that their employees will unconsciously follow suit. As a result, a company will survive and thrive. The richest man in China- Wang Jianlin, as known to all, gets up early as most commuters to start his work and never get home before 9:00 P.M. On the top of his career, he used to work constantly for three days. It’s not hard to find that staff work in his company are always busy with various tasks, projects and errands. Because in his company, hard working exhibited by their leader is encouraged and this ability is needed to stand a better chance to achieve success.
Needless to say, with all the dimensions mentioned above incorporated,I strongly vote for the idea that working hard and decision-making ability are what matters in most leaders and politicians than good communication skills.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23602484472 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.153209109731 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0931677018634 0.0866891130778 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0496894409938 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103519668737 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0393374741201 0.0351676179071 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07250307047 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0393374741201 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.00207039337474 0.00188951952338 110% => OK
Determiners: 0.0869565217391 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165631469979 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124223602484 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2533.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 417.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07434052758 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359712230216 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258992805755 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167865707434 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122302158273 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07250307047 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 63.2562958359 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.85 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6897681954 48.84282405 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.65 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.85 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3 0.644075263715 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 46.7492805755 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.53781512605 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381144430892 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119209186088 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0948690900737 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.535124204535 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196157965022 0.151897553556 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149564786476 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132540073081 0.0781384742642 170% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.202506613038 0.336927656856 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0885808535928 0.067059652881 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239970378243 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121885946084 0.0618886996521 197% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.