Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
The truth is not always applicable to tell in all cases of our life. Knowing the real state of affairs can hurt feelings of anyone or basically some people are unready to obtain part of information.
To begin with, our life sometimes is severe and immeasurably unfair. The honest and genuine data could damage mental health. For instance, parents have to alleviate or even hide part of real facts. Time-appropriate peaces of information help us grow happy and adequate persons. Personally, I do not want to know in my younger age where I came from, why my old cat disappeared and sad circumstances of other events. The truth would not bring to my life any nice and profitable knowledge in those cases.
The second idea in favor of the first proposition is that obtaining the truth leads to getting responsibility. I prefer to let secrets be secret. Knowing all sorts of data make life heavy, thoughtful, dim, and wistful. For example, hopefully, in few families a father are not loyal to a mother and vice versa. I believe, that factor is highly likely enough to disappoint a child and brake his or her mind. Children normally love both of the parents and it is so hard for kids to realize that one of parents is bad or good. All of the above is a good illustration that telling the truth entails nasty consequences.
To sum all up, I claim with confidence that pure truth could ruin relationship, destroy mental health and aggravate the word of others.
- Some ppl believe that advertising informs customers about products and services that can enhance their lives Others feel that it manipulates consumers into purchasing items they have no real need for 60
- Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. 76
- Independency from parents or staying with Tham longer 70
- Parents are best Teachers 60
- What I want to improve in my town 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ize that one of parents is bad or good. All of the above is a good illustration that telli...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in all cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71484375 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76754159843 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3674962545 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4375 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136083640105 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04027274689 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679593746947 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833881536428 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315304096344 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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