Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In civilized and industrialized societies, having a happy life plays a pivotal role in human beings' lives. Today, it is axiomatic that people usually elapse the longer part of their life working, so they have less time to be happy. A plethora of people possess the conviction that nowadays people are less satisfied with their lives, whereas others might hold exactly the opposite view. I firmly endorse the former conviction instead of the later one. In what follows, I am going to aptly delve into the most outstanding reasons to advocate my view point.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that today, because of rising inflation and poor economic conditions, most of people spend their much time for working to make a living. Therefore, in this situation, they have a lot of stress and anxiety about it. In other words, the more financial circumstances worsen, the more individuals in society are angry. So, the amount of happy people in the community is declining. In my own experience, my family tries to keep pace with runaway inflation due to poor economic condition in my society. In fact, they are under financial pressure and this issue has reduced the quality of our lives. Hence, my family is less happy compared to last year.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that most of people want to have a luxurious life in the modern era. In essence, the expectation of people to have a luxurious life has increased compared to the past. Therefore, they are constantly comparing their lives to those of others. It is no secret that nowadays, with the rise of a number of educated people in the societies, competition to find a decent job has increased so that they can gain a luxurious life by having a decent vocation. This fact is another main reason why people now are less satisfied with their lives. For example, according to a survey conducted in eight industrialized countries, known as G8, back in 2013, revealed that 65 percent of people of these countries were upset and anxious, because they were more involved in competing with others to get more money.
To put it in briefly, all the enumerated reasons lead us to the conviction that today people are less happy with their lives than people who have lived in the past. However, a paramount issue that must be mentioned is that this cannot be used as a prescription for everybody and some counterexamples might exist, which are not mentioned above. As a result, I suggest conducting more surveys and studies to answer this question more precisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...inflation and poor economic conditions, most of people spend their much time for working to ma...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...y point supporting this opinion is that most of people want to have a luxurious life in the mo...
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Line 13, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to answer this question more precisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in brief, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88990825688 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66908923202 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511467889908 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9497402323 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.523809524 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297656068751 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089129041801 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939719707258 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19153716767 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488443665939 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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