Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling is one of the fascinating activities for the youth and adults. Personally, I think that examine new destinations is always better in a company of a tour guide. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, guides are people who have a lot of information about the places they take tourists to, and so, visitors can learn more when they are led by someone knowledgeable than if they travel on their own. Not only that, but a tour guide can introduce travelers to locals, who the visitors can chat with and understand better a new for them culture. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When a couple years ago I had a trip to Paris, I was traveling solely with my friend. It was a great experience, however, a few times we got lost in the city and spent a lot of time looking for routes to get to mention that we wanted to explore. On the other hand, when last summer, my husband and I were visiting Germany we joined a group of tourists headed by a guide. At this time, we were able to learn a myriad of facts about the history of this country and check a variety of monuments because the guide knew exactly where to go and he had many stories to tell us about each of them.
Secondly, voyaging with a tour guide is safer than traveling alone and can benefit families with children. It is often a dilemma for parents whether or not they should take their kids with them on a trip because any adventure can be risky. Hiring a guide can minimize the risk. For instance, when during our visit to Germany, which I mentioned above, my spouse and I took help from a guide and we did not face any problems with finding a restaurant, restroom or a hotel to spend safely a night since the guide always had a solution for any our request. All the time during the tour, I felt protected and it helped me to relax and enjoy every minute of the journey. As a result, I am certain that if in the future we will decide to have our children with us, we will definitely take an assistance from a tour guide.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the best way to explore new places is to join a group of travelers headed by an experienced guide. This is because this helps people to familiarize better with a new culture and guarantees voyagers an excellent time-spending.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...dren. It is often a dilemma for parents whether or not they should take their kids with them o...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es voyagers an excellent time-spending.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37385321101 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50929905096 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520642201835 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9838472612 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.944444444 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149700072808 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533767175007 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420917156519 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102911544358 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01415193231 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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