Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates and partner can communicate with each other face to face to finish the project than by sending e-mail
A project is a job which could be made by one or more than one people who work in a company, study in university or etc.Some of these projects are a difficult and some of them are an easy.Both of them have their advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, let's think a big project which will be completed by classmates.And, These big projects last much time than easy ones.And, all members of the project make an extra effort, and they should concentrate carefully.Then, in these kind of projects there could be many failures or mistakes if members affect each other negatively.Also, there must be enough time in these projects because members of companies' projects need seconds for finishing their works.
Also, for improving effectivity people should work together in all their environments.Because, some students want to escape working, and they usually do not work enough,in group methods they can not do these kind of behaviours.Because, other members may argue and criticize all lazy members.Moreover, all problems of projects discussed in time, and all of them could be solved as soon as possible.Then, all students have their an IQ level, and some of them have high, and some student have a low iq level.And, some students know a part of their project, another part know another part.So, they can divide their project to different parts, and they make their parts at the same time and in same place.Although, they have not enough a knowledge they can finish their project in a schedule.
In contrast, in easy project students do their project parts alone in their house or home.This approach which studying alone could be effective, because members do not affect negatively.And, they can think and consider their project productively.Group members share their notes and parts with e-mail, and they use mail checking.
In my opinion, taking account of all above advantages, when students in a hard project they should choose face to face working, i definitely select that statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, in contrast, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10670731707 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13608978134 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.1344086022 323% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.229195136 48.9658058833 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.0 100.406767564 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.6 20.6045352989 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8 5.45110844103 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159268685978 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103202910808 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364380224242 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103202910808 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364380224242 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 11.7677419355 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 58.1214874552 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 10.1575268817 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.0537634409 279% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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