Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that human activity has both advantages and disadvantages on earth. If I had to agree or disagree on the statement, I would agree on the following statement. I firmly believe that humun activity is harming our planet earth, and I would demonstrate the reasons in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, Today, majority of the machines operated by humuns are in some way harming our environment. Cars, Trucks and other vehicles are efficient tools for transportation but on the other hand, they are major source of carbon dioxide and other obnoxious gases in the environment. These gases makes the breathing process difficult for humuns and other living creatures. My opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Few years ago, our family shifted to Delhi, my father who is an asthma patient started facing difficulties in breathing. Doctor advised us to leave Delhi because of its poor air quality, and settle to a place with less pollution. If there would have been less pollution in Delhi, We would have remained there without any problems.
Secondly, With time, population of humuns is increasing gradually and so is the industrialization. The increased industrialization is causing more deforestation. Today, a lots of efforts and money is invested in augmenting the infrastructure, but it is coming at the cost of forests. We humuns are relentlessly destroying forests for our own benefit. Forest is habitat for various animals and when we cut them we are snatching their homes, which is the cause for extinction of several species. For example, last year in Mumbai, high court approved to cut down 2000 tress for an ongoing metro project. As a result, several leopards residing in those areas started coming to roads in search of prey.
Lastly, Majority of the humuns prefer using leather for purse, bags and belts. These accessiories are made by peeling the skins of crocodile, cattle and other animals. A large percent of these animals are killed just to satisfy our fancy demands.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that humun activity is harming our planet. This is because we humuns are reponsible for extinction of several species, and polluting our air. We humuns are harming ourselves, and other living beings in several ways, making this planet a difficult place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...s gases in the environment. These gases makes the breathing process difficult for hum...
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Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
...o a place with less pollution. If there would have been less pollution in Delhi, We would have ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...n is causing more deforestation. Today, a lots of efforts and money is invested in aug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11458333333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89304046977 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7879970907 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3913043478 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6956521739 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126035974558 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384253287548 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618940662178 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848894515433 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927438972717 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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