In this era, people have a variety of entertainments to do in their leisure times. Some ones prefer to relax by watching television or reading books in their free times; however, others have different plans, such as doing exercise, for their relaxation. Personally, I believe it would be beneficial for people to do exercises, swimming, playing football, or so forth in their free times. In the following lines, I will elaborate on two outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, doing physical activities keep our bodies healthy and fresh for doing other tasks during a day. Doing exercise increases the metabolism and heart rate; therefore, the blood flow would be controlled better. This control of blood flow would make the body and also the brain fresh. Hence, a person who is doing exercise during a day have a healthier mind and a fit body. For instance, I have a friend, Sara, who is a basketball player. She always goes out and plays basketball with her friends in her leisure time. Although she loves reading novels she believe that exercise helped her to think better for her projects at firm and keep her body in fit.
Secondly, doing exercise could be a kind of social interaction in order to get rid of depression and daily pressures. Indeed, some ones prefer to gather and do group exercises such as hiking or biking for finding new friends. This kind of plans, spend the relaxing time with others, would have perfect impacts on people’s behaviors and spirit. For example, last year, I have decided to join a hiking group for release my work pressures; because I felt depression due to the heavy work times. Thus, I went to high mountains with that group for several months; because being with other ones made me happy. After that, I realized that how much my morale is better and I could deal with my problems better than before.
To put it briefly, as I mentioned above, not only does doing exercise keep our bodies and minds in fit but also it helps us to release the pressures which are created in our daily lives. While, reading books and watching a movie are perfect ways for relaxation I highly recommend doing physical activities in order to be relaxed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
.... Although she loves reading novels she believe that exercise helped her to think bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79100529101 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51928676425 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9502268812 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3157894737 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26110973859 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796765449825 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708329047922 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164326908155 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361744925615 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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