Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
There is no shortage of opinion whether we should be aware of every affairs taking place around the world. In my opinion, people must be informed about every events irrespective of it will influence their life. I feel this way for two main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, it is impossible to determine whether it will influence people's life without knowing about that because some events can be so widespread that it will affect people in the distant area. Therefore, individuals must get at least general data of significant actions in the every nations. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter was influenced by my own experience. Because I thought only local news are significant to me, I had never checked the international news sources until the outbreak of novel corona virus, which is the main reason why I could not make any precaution before it is recorded in my native country, Mongolia. If I had checked the global news sites without considering it is not considerable for me, I would have prepared for this ailment. Unfortunately, I could not find any face mask and hand sanitizer in light of shortage of supply because others were well-informed about the situation. Drawing from my own experience, because any event might be influential for individuals life, people should get at least basic knowledge about events.
Secondly, in today's world, most people have sufficient knowledge about various branch, especially critical episodes in Earth. Thereby, individuals need to have information about these things so that they will keep up with other people. To illustrate this, I would like to provide my friend's experience of dating with women with average knowledge. He said that they chitchatted about divergent type of matters, and shared opinion on basic things. He was handling process adequately, and providing satisfactory analysis and explanation while they were talking about local things. However, he was embarrassed and had nothing to say when the girl started mentioning global episodes because he has never paid attention to other things. Hence, she could not meet her again albeit everything was consummate but his knowledge about events took place in other nations.
To sum up, knowing episodes that happen in Earth is essential for everyone. This is because something may be far-reaching, end up influencing people who were unaware. Moreover, individuals need to know crucial data about episodes in order to keep up with their peers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 790, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consummated'.
Suggestion: consummated
...ot meet her again albeit everything was consummate but his knowledge about events took pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, at least, i feel, talking about, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15365853659 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78000530687 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558536585366 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1657147455 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.65 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167617924595 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054000722939 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477780799575 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105854095617 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197187758237 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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