Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercises.
Relaxation, as we all know, for the majority of people, is the most crucial part of their life. Although it may seem exaggerated, at first sight, many people may debate about the feel of relaxing sensible. In this regard, many people support this opinion that it is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercises. Contrary to common belief, I believe that doing exercises brings not only the relaxation feeling but also provides a situation for making friends that are helpful for a comfortable feeling, as well. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold this belief that doing exercise provide relaxation feeling is the concentration. Undoubtedly, during exercising, the mind focuses on a job that the body has done and distracted from the other concerns a person may have thought about. Moreover, doing exercise makes the body become tired, and we can sleep after that comfortably. Although many scholars may critic this behavior, and assume it unsuitable, as we all know, that kind of sleep is the most pleasant, and very helpful for relaxation. Take my personal experience as an example, when I exposing to the traumatic situation I try to avoid it as much as possible, and the best way that helps me to refute every stressful situation is the feeling of focusing that I have experienced while doing an exercise. Therefore, doing exercise is helpful, both physically and mentally.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is making friends. Without a doubt, having many friends is a helpful way of reducing stress or providing the feeling of comfortable. Apparently, one of the best ways that a person can make friends is in a gym, which lots of people doing the same activity. Based on an experiment that has conducted recently, results showed that people who have many friends with common interests would feel more relaxed when they spend time with each other than people who spend time reading books solely. Therefore, as human beings that social life plays a dominant role in our lives, what would have happened to our feelings if we had not had friends? Thus, finding a way of making friends is critical to us, and which way is more adorable than doing exercise?
To summarize, contemplating all remarks, we can safely conclude that doing sport provides the feeling of relaxation both by concentrating the mind on an activity a person does and by providing friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97862232779 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70013071444 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524940617577 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5133172767 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3888888889 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19771755225 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677242389352 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935718584047 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12685079981 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552451441393 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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