Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s easier for parents to raise children than 50 years ago. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Raising children require parents to make many efforts. Modern children-raising is become increasingly attach importance to well-rounded development of children. Some people think it is easier for parents to raise children than 50 years ago. However, from my perspective, I disagree with the statement.
Firstly, raising children nowadays need a growing number of material substances to be given than 50 years ago, which indicates raising children is more difficult. Modern children-raising is become increasingly attach importance to well-rounded development of children. Some parents want their children to stand out in the future, so they cost much on children’s interest cultivation. For example, my sister’s salary is 8 thousand Yuan per month. But my sister spends 50 thousand Yuan every year on children’s interest classes such as playing the piano, calligraphy, and dancing, which is a big strain on my sister. However, in modern parents’ eyes, more skills mean more competitiveness in the world. They do not want their children lay behind, since other parents do the same. So, raising children now is also a race of money, sometimes it can also cause stress on parents. But in 50 years ago there was no such trend that parents only need to feed their children, which was not that difficult.
Furthermore, raising children nowadays need more time spent in accompanying with children, which implies difficulty of raising children. Such as I mentioned above, if their children go to interest class, parents need to pick up their children. Commuting to the class venue is time- consuming. Besides, modern education always involves communication among parents and teachers. Parents have to report their children’s behavior at home every day. They have to supervise their children complete homework and answer their questions. It is annoying for parents sometimes since parents have their own work. On the contrary, in 50 years ago, there was no need to spend much time accompanying children. The children might have no homework, not mention to interest class.
Finally, raising children require parents spend more energy on their children than 50 years ago. To be more concrete, raising children needs more attention on children’s mentality. There are many children who are diagnosed with mental problems because of fierce competition. Children have too much stress to manage their own mood or brain. Sometimes they tend to be solitude, do not want to contact with others; sometimes they express their resistance to study; sometimes they feel depression and do not know how to get rid of it. This need parents, who are most intimate with children to observe and find out these mental problems. But in 50 years ago, children did not have such stress and it was likely they did not need much observation from parents.
In conclusion, today’s children raising need more money, time and energy on children than in 50 years ago, which illustrate raising children is more difficult than 50 years ago rather than easier.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2562.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2824742268 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84034819186 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451546391753 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8693807713 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.43333333333 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32344386647 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110689662318 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843849240942 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25529899205 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656239366475 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2562.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2824742268 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84034819186 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451546391753 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8693807713 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.43333333333 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32344386647 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110689662318 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843849240942 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25529899205 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656239366475 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.