Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It was easier to achieve success in the past than it is today.
In the modern era, Many changes and inventions make numerous differences in comparation to the past. Most of this change have the good effect on my life and make many oppurtunities to proggress in human life. In contrast, with some ideas that tell; achiving the success in the past was easier, in my opinion this isn’t complete idea, because it don’t assumed many of things, I will explain two of them in the below paragraphs.
First, Nowdays, the world is witness of the great progress at information tecnologty (IT), IT influance on many aspect of my life such as education, economic, cultural and any other aspects, that these weren’t the past. IT trace give more comfortable in our life and save more money and time for us, with this advantage people could focus on their work and create more free time for more try and more work to achiving to the success. Imagine online shpping and internet llibraries that everyone could order anything quickly and don’t need people go to their places, it save many time of people that give them more time to concentration on their works and be success easier. For example when I was at the collage the online network of the university started to work, then when I was at the dorm I be able to reserved my dinner and studied the artcile in the library with online network. Therefore I had more time for study and practice at the dorm.
Second, Many opportunities create todays that they weren’t before this time, many new places have constructed that people can go to there and use their opportunities. In the economical cases many huge buildings constracted such as malls that they have various function as shopping, gaming, food and etc, it attract many of people everyday, Its ability give people this opportunity that investment to their places and work there and become success eventually. For instance, in near of my home, a comercial complex building constracted and this center have created more than two thousands job opportiunities that give everyone to work there, the investors of this complex center say that their investment became double only during one year. Hence the new opportunites be able to create sharp success for the people.
Finally, even though, some people belive that achiving to the success was easier at the past, In my view, nowdays successful is easier than past, becuase IT proggress create noticable advantage that give the people achive the success easier than past, in addition new places constracted todays that they create further oppurtunities to people. Thereby, nowdays, be successful is easier than past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rmation tecnologty IT, IT influance on many aspect of my life such as education, economic,...
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..., that these weren't the past. IT trace give more comfortable in our life and s...
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...ork and create more free time for more try and more work to achiving to the success. I...
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...os;t need people go to their places, it save many time of people that give them mor...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...le in the library with online network. Therefore I had more time for study and practice ...
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... as shopping, gaming, food and etc, it attract many of people everyday, Its ability gi...
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...food and etc, it attract many of people everyday, Its ability give people this opportuni...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ent became double only during one year. Hence the new opportunites be able to create...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15454545455 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76211082297 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509090909091 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.139803826 48.9658058833 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.461538462 100.406767564 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8461538462 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1725722116 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744202176256 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877297167045 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135016715793 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107245016679 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 11.7677419355 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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