Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from our personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
Knowledge remains knowledge either gained from books or personal experience. Some people believe that the knowledge from personal experiences is more valuable and some believe that the Knowledge gained from books is more valuable. But, I believe that the knowledge gained from personal experiences is more prestigious and valuable. I feel this way, which I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, the Knowledge from gained books is not enough to compete with the person who has personal experience, because books are not accurate and often contradict in some cases. In some cases personal experience is precious for example, in the field of Automobile engineering, the person can learn the process from books but is unable to learn how to tackle the real-world problems like manufacturing problems, machine constraints, assembly constraints, environment constraints, etc. which is only in filled by personal experience. In these cases, books are not capable of providing enough knowledge.
Secondly, it’s the scientific fact that humans learn more from personal experience than from books. The knowledge gained from books is ephemeral whereas, the knowledge from personal experience is prolonged. For example, after completion of the Graduation degree, the students weren’t able to recognize what they had learned in first-year exams because with time theoretical knowledge faded away whereas they completely recognize the practical work they had done during that time.
In the conclusion, knowledge can be gained either by personal experience or by books, but I believe that knowledge gained through training is more important.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, i feel, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60642570281 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85589329529 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493975903614 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1638157381 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348965246993 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171322869062 0.076458572812 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118698246266 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241671371603 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698165989042 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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