It is clearly understood that in such a sophisticated world, is very important for everyone that give enough time to help communities and improve them. Most of the people believe youngest people do not give enough time for these activities, whereas others hold exactly the opposite perspective. As far as I am concerned, this is everyone's duty to give them their attention to such an important subject, especially young people. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that attention to communities staff is very necessary for everyone, whit this activities people could improve their different ability. But nowadays everything getting far away from reality. For example, young people spend all their time on the internet and the unreality world, They do not know the world in a real way, and this issue could be very harmful to the future of communities. In real life people should be involved with the real problem, they should try to find every solution by their try, hardworking, and getting help from others, whit this activity personal characters get improve, and nowadays we getting lost in the virtual world.
َAnother reason which should be taken into consideration is that nowadays young people run away from their responsibility, and this could be harmful to them, and for society. Helping communities could prepare them for big responsibilities in the future. For example, my brother always runs away from his duty as a member of society and bypasses time this behavior becomes a habit for him, and now in a series activity, he always has a problem. So if young people do not involve in such an activity, more than anyone they get heart shortly. Help to communities is a very important matter, and everyone should attention to these activities.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that expending enough time to help communities, and improve their personality is a very important issue that is not deniable for anyone. This activity has a series relation with future of society and everyone should be responsible for that, and try to have a better nation in the near future. In fact, there is a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'believe the youngest'.
Suggestion: believe the youngest
...es and improve them. Most of the people believe youngest people do not give enough time for thes...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a real way" with adverb for "real"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ality world, They do not know the world in a real way, and this issue could be very harmful t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, if, so, whereas, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9875 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80031136662 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9371569693 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6875 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230980969413 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825984865035 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475565123586 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153959158074 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297813574583 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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