Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The information represents a big pillar of our lives. We live in diverse societies and we are in a constant exposition of different news and opinions from different categories of groups. Some people support the idea that certain opinions from celebrities are much important to the young generation than the old one; others would disagree. As far I am concerned, I believe that the influence and the importance of the opinion of the idols to our young people are much crucial than they are to others for two essential reasons.
First, the main reason is that celebrities use an easy and simple message in expressing their opinions. The categories of the young generation do not have a highly advanced level when they communicate on a daily basis with each other or even in the school, they are in their early stages of education. The language they often used is basic and simple, so by consequence, the easiest way to grasp an idea from another part is to be at the same level of frequency. For example, my ten-years-old nephew was a super fan of English football and his idol was a player named Wayne Rooney. This latter chose to become a professional player rather than having a high education in university, therefore, he had the same level of language as an high-school pupil. Always my nephew watched the after match interview with players and he could easily understand the message of certain players as the one mentioned above. The player message was so basic without a technical word. The player was saying phrases as "beautiful game", "we did not play well", "the referee was against us"...etc. As you can see, the opinions of celebrities weigh much more in the head of our youngsters than the older one, which they seek for more sophisticated and detailed language.
Second, their opinions are popular and sometimes controversial. Some opinions are intriguing so they go viral and this creates an enormous popularity. When something is popular it goes bigger and bigger like the snowball effect by just following the trend of the others. For instance, recently president Trump made several tweets inculpating south Americans for the atrocious economy in the USA. Most grown-up and educated people did not put much attention into his comment because for them it is considered as a banal one. However, the young people with little understanding of the economy, they just took the words of the president and just digest it as it is a definite and a none debatable comment. This experience unveils that the young generation is more susceptible to information sent off from celebrities and they take them for granted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 732, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e, he had the same level of language as an high-school pupil. Always my nephew wat...
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Line 3, column 754, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...el of language as an high-school pupil. Always my nephew watched the after match inter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2214.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98648648649 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8457169328 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.23408784 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.7 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159825408677 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461341631826 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450965090165 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107537592002 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174507646986 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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