There is no disputing the fact that nowadays most of us can’t do without the Internet. The Internet has had a massive influence on almost all aspects of our modern life, like communication, health, and the environment. There are many pros and cons to the Internet, making people around the world hold different positions about this phenomenon. Mainly, elderly people criticize the Internet for having harmful effects on the quality of life. Another group of people states that one cannot gloss over the positive impacts the Internet has on human lives. I agree with the statement that the Internet has had a net positive impact on our lives for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, there have been so many medical improvements thanks to the Internet. For instance, a surgeon connoisseur of heart diseases in the united states can perform surgery on a patient in Venezuela using robotics and an internet connection. In this regard, the destination is no longer a barrier to saving human lives. It is also worthy to mention that scientists around the world can easily publish their papers in medical journals and doctors all over the world can access their new findings which in turn allows them to use the best treatments on their patients. For example, scientists in England found a new diagnostic test that could detect the presence of a specific virus inside the human body in less than 2 minutes. Having their method published online, all the countries around the world could make use of their new method to control the propagation rate of the virus better, which was conducive to saving lots of lives.
Furthermore, the Internet obliterated the need for physical presence for some activities like running errands or paying the bills. We can have most of our transactions done using the Internet at any time of the day. Students can also use the Internet to pay for the expenses related to their matriculation or even their application fees. In my example, I could easily pay for my taxi ride in a safe way and without contact using the Internet during the pandemic. Had the Internet never existed, living would have been so much harder indeed.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the Internet has had a net positive influence on our lives. This is because it has been an essential factor in recent developments in many criteria like medical treatments. Moreover, the Internet has imparted comfort to our daily life in many ways, like doing transactions online.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a safe way" with adverb for "safe"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le, I could easily pay for my taxi ride in a safe way and without contact using the Internet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91764705882 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61535947631 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5317234544 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233454352928 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733530458973 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490497048465 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144843463389 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762712497847 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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