Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally,I agree that parents are the best teachers, they know us better than anyone in our life.In my opinion they are the best,because they are the most compassionate and the closest people to their child.
First and foremost, we can`t find people that love us more than parents and also we are the most important thing to our parents life.They teach us the best things with the best ways.Except those reason that I mention,they do the best they can because anywhere and anytime people see us they know us,as a result of our paranets.
Furthermore when we are born,the first things that we see are my parents.they are close to us every moment,thus,they have the biggest impact on us,also,they feel us,espicialy mothers.Some times we have a problem and no one know that but sudenly our mothers look at us and say that, are you ok?
In addition they see us more than other people and know what we need to learn about life or anything that nessesary to us.
To sum up,according to those reasons and examples,I think we can never find better teachers than our parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 407.700716846 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77068314029 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 212.727598566 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561497326203 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0694111354 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.2 100.406767564 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4 20.6045352989 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 22.0 5.45110844103 404% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916746776556 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562165691092 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050914069983 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562165691092 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050914069983 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 11.7677419355 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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