Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use Specific reasons to support your answer.
Every coin has two side, likewise having everything and not satisfied with it have its two sides. Sometimes it is good for the particular people and sometime its bad. I agree with the fact that people never satisfied with what they have, they always want something more and something different. And here we say that this is role of modern life, people want more and more to satisfied their happiness.
In todays modern world, we chasing a race everyone wants to best and first, so try to compare themselves to others. And this is the reason they actually not feel stable with whatever they have and they want to get more to get fit in this modern world. This is a bad side of the scenario. For example, I want to share the experience of one of my friends, she is very pretty looking girl, but she always compares herself to others, with her looks and outfit. And one day she said to she was going to do her lip surgery because, her lips are not looking attractive anymore and she wants to make them attractive like Hollywood actress and she done that surgery and it goes wrong. Sometimes always not gives positive result.
On the other hand, sometimes it is important to try for something more, sometimes it is important to push ourself to get more try something different and get something better than what we already have. For example, we can take an example of studies, or job, here it is important to keep trying for getting more, like if we are students so, we always have to try harder for better grades than previous, same thing happen with job, for getting a promotion or an appraisal we need to try something different and sometimes we also need to take risk for our betterment. Not having satisfied with already whatever we have.
Hence, not having satisfied enough and trying for more, sometimes it gives a good or bad result. And its totally depends on us to chase right thing. Because not try for best from better is also not a good thing. But, before that we have to considered all the consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...rticular people and sometime its bad. I agree with the fact that people never satisfied with what they h...
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Line 4, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave to considered all the consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, likewise, look, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5467032967 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36200317325 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.761642545 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3529411765 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302353911644 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110817811878 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147673936901 0.0737576698707 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198741370732 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137576991247 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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