Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country.
Most of the people doing traveling as part of the life. It gives more relax and fun to life. Personally, I disagree with the statment which says people benifit more from traveling in their own country than traveling to foreing countreis. I feels this way two main reasons, which I explore in the following eassy.
First of all, when we traveling to foreign countries we can get knowlge about the out side of world. We can know what are the differents and simillar things to compare the other countries. We get change to study arther verity of people's cultuter, ecomnmy, history, life stye and ect. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I traveled to India and Japan. I learned somuch differents between the my country, India and Japan. As example in food, Japan most of the time use sea food with natural leaves. In India, all the time use masala tates with the currys. In my country use coconut milk and coccount oil for currys.
Secondly, by traveling to forign countries we can keep good mutual relationship between the countries. When people go to one county to orther country people have good hospitality to treat orthers. It help to keep peace between the counties.Also people can exchange technology, money, econmy and ect. For instance, Sri Lanka and India always keep good mutual understand about ther each of them. They help to each of them get any disaster or any problem get from other country. Also China and Sri Lanka always keep good relationship both of them. Most of the Sri Lankan students study in the China and India. Also, when while people are traveling they can expaned thier businuess and relatioship with others. Thus, mutual relatioship build up introduce people each of them by country wise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83612040134 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46466738029 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2229726065 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.7272727273 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5909090909 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288669360531 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786424247638 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101369839539 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221682870232 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133951663367 0.0645574589148 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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