Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Agree to some extent but not completely.
As people, we will have the necessity to travel from one place to anohter. Be it from home to office or school to shopping or cinema.
One can consider the commute as an unproductive, monotonimous but very essential part of our lives. And I completely
agree with the idea that we should search for ways to automate anything that is tiring and monotonimous as it can facilitate us
to spend more time on doing productive or intellectual tasks. Different places are located at varying distances from each other and
for one to get his/her work done, it is better to use automobiles instead of walking or cycling as it would consume not only time
but also a lot of energy. Hence, it is because of varyi
In this context, I would like to cite an example from my own experience. I was born in a remote village in India where we don't have
access to quality education even now though it has been almost 22 years since I was born. As a result, my parents decided to admit me
in a boarding school which was almost 200 km from my village. I used to travel for good 6 long hours to changing buses every 50 kms.
But the education I got was worth traveling for 4 to 5 times a year. And now, I have secure job living happily with my parents.
Had it not been for the automobiles, I can gaurentee that I would not have the life I have now. So, it is not appropriate to claim
that the world has become too dependent on automobiles.
However, having said that, sometimes it makes me ponder if we have become too depedent on the automobiles. And the answer could be
yes sometimes. We frequently have to travel from one place to another place which are quite a distance apart. In this wont of
grabbing an automobile everytime we go out, we are unconciously using automobiles even for the places that are very close by, for
example, to a dairy which is 50 meters away or to a park that is two blocks away. If we instead use a bicycle or go on foot, it not
only keeps our body fit but also contribute to saving the environment from the harmful gases. Hence, I would qualify my statement that
we did not become too depedent on automobiles and agree that we unnecessairly use automobiles even for very short distances.
To conclude, I belive that in today's world, we are have not become too dependent on the automobiles as they help us in
focusing more on productive tasks and saves a lot of energy. At the same time, I would not go to the extent of completely endorsing
it as we sometimes use automobiles even for places that are very close by.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... quite a distance apart. In this wont of grabbing an automobile everytime we go o...
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...r the places that are very close by, for example, to a dairy which is 50 meters a...
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...nt on the automobiles as they help us in focusing more on productive tasks and sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43949044586 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61547169885 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488322717622 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3983717436 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.19047619048 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.53405017921 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191103044955 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597263021721 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569825620358 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659338533031 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666929714933 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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