Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

We categorize ages in different groups on the basis of age of a child and one of the group of ages is defined as childhood. Childhood is a period of years of age from birth to twelve years. Obviously, all people experience this childhood years in their life. Although some people believe that childhood years are the most important years of a person’s life, others believe that it is not important period than other periods. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree with the statement which states that childhood years are the most important years. There are a few reasons for my choice. I have explored my views in the following lines.

First and foremost, childhood years are responsible for development of children. More importantly, it is deemed as language development years. In short, a child can learn variety of languages in this meanwhile in very short time. Moreover, researchers have proved that a child in age of ten can learn language very fast than any age in his/her life. Hence, it is important that a child should be exposed in suitable environment to learn different skills and languages. Parents are the most responsible persons who should decide the language to teach their child.

Secondly, children are dependent on their parents in childhood years. Children learn what we teach them. Also, grasping power of a child in this period is very high or reaches to apex that any other period in a person’s life. So, it depends on parents decision making. Hence, a good parent should admit their children in the best school, he/she can afford. If a child is exposed in the best school in his/her region, its growth and development will be very quick and rapid. Ultimately, his/her future will be definitely bright one. In addition, parents should teach etiquette another activities such as sports, because it reforms both mental and physical health of a person or a child.

However, some people hold view that group of ages which consists of ages from thirteen to twenty one is the most important period. They believe that a person in this age is generally term as independent. He/she can stand on his own shoulders. Furthermore, a person can take his own decisions such as deciding a field of career in which he is interested. Also, age of eighteen id the most important for a person, since a child turns into mature age. A person is physically and mentally fit at this stage of life and his productivity to do work is maximum. Hence, various companies recruit a person (at this stage) as a fresh blood for their organization to improve their productivity.

In conclusion, it is obvious from the above discussion that childhood is the most important period in a person’s life. Advantages of this period overwhelm over any other period of ages in a person’s life. As we discussed, child development, language development, high grasping power, learning power, etc features belong to childhood.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2444.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92741935484 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80068697905 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447580645161 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2350513687 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8387096774 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1935483871 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313894713834 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846080011669 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904363735961 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192204367156 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126616655074 0.0645574589148 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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