Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing sports can teach people lessons about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, a sport has played a prominent role in all societies. Whether or not doing exercise may lean human some lessons about their life, is controversial. I believe that playing and contributing to a group or individual sports teach many lessons to an individual; so, I agree with this proposal. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first important factor to be mention is that sports would learn to people how to persist and endurance to achieve their aim. To elaborate on my point, when a person wants to start a sport, she must practice a lot to learn how to play well. Then, she should practise more and more for preparing a champian. In that time, she may fail in some matches, but she must continue to practice to achieve a goal so that she would not become disappointed. Therefore, in her life, she learns how to persist for achieving her goal. Also, she leans if she fails in her path, she must continue to practice for aim.
Another reason which deserves some word here is that doing a group sport learns people how to connect in the best ways with other people. To shed more light on this matter, since people contribute to group sport, they must connect in the best ways. In other words, in a group sport, all sportsman have one aim so that they must connect well with each other. And they should hear their coach and obey him or her. In this situation, some athlete may face with some idea that opposite with their opinion. Because they are members of a team, they must obey and tolerate this opposite idea. Hence, people who play sport learn how to tolerate the opposite idea and how to defend their opinion. In the real-life, they also can tolerate disagreement opinion and control their behaviour.
Also, I believe that sports learn people how to become healthy. To elaborate on my point, when an individual does some sports, they could try to eat healthy food. In other word, people doing some sports to become healthy and prevent some hard disease such as heart attack or blood pressure. Hence, they try to eat organic material and healthy food. Consider a woman who playing bodybuilding for instance. In each trade, she runs fast on treadmills for burning her calories. So, she must feel exiting after each time. Hence, for saving their body in the best situation, she never eats unhealthy food such as fast food and junk food.
All in all, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that sports teach many lessons to humans for their life. I believe that doing some sports not only learn people how achieving their aim but also learn them how connection well with other people. Furthermore, sport learns people to live healthily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice achieving'.
Suggestion: practice achieving
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...e that doing some sports not only learn people how achieving their aim but also learn ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...other people. Furthermore, sport learns people to live healthily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75890985325 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40845924977 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454926624738 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5892611557 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.275862069 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4482758621 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8275862069 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177776404343 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552717298545 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518906187456 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128843728548 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777675140077 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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