Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, teachers have always played a big role in every students' character and mindset development, and they should be appreciated for that. However, personally I believe teachers were more respected in the past than these days. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, when we look at old times, we discern that there weren't so many source of knowledge like today. Only a few number of people knew how to read and write and among them even less people had high education. Thus, literate people were outnumbered. Plus, teachers were the only source that those who wanted to learn could attend to. My grandfather's experience is a compelling example of this. He narrates that when he was a kid and living in a village, there was only a person in their area who could have read and write, and due to his strong enthusiasm for learning, he respected the man so much that even he insisted on doing his chores after the class.
On the other hand, nowadays, teachers are not the only rare source of knowledge and there are so many educational content on the internet which can be learnt without teachers. For instance, for my final bachelor project, i needed to learn some foundation of deep learning. As long as all my courses at university were passed and only my project was left, I had no choice but to explore it on the internet and surprisingly I found a twelve sessions course of Stanford university on Youtube. Moreover, these days almost all the people have the literacy to write and read and there are so many teachers even in the furthermost villages.
Furthermore, children’s manners were so much different from now. Today's kids barely respect their own parents, let alone teachers. It is not an exaggeration if we say that most of them even despise school and all its staff. They are much more independent than old kids and they think they can get whatever they need on the internet. From my standpoint, nowadays children have different criteria for respecting a person than what we had in our childhood.
In conclusion, I concur that teachers were more respected in the past and they were one of the rare source of knowledge those days, but today, in favor of technology and the internet, there are myriad sources that can teach us instead of teachers and their presence has got more on wane.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... have always played a big role in every students character and mindset development, and ...
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Suggestion: weren't
...ook at old times, we discern that there werent so many source of knowledge like today....
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
... times, we discern that there werent so many source of knowledge like today. Only a few num...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
... source of knowledge like today. Only a few number of people knew how to read and write an...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...w to read and write and among them even less people had high education. Thus, litera...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nstance, for my final bachelor project, i needed to learn some foundation of deep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71739130435 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58387841973 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4121688946 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.789473684 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166428116268 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519268395007 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535182666885 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107383668417 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576423128779 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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