Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The pace of the life is dramatically increased in recent decades. More burden are come up on our shoulders. But each person have his ultimate goals in the contemporary society and to achieve this goals, he needs sometimes to abandon many essential and enjoyable things. Although some people thinks that the life in the past was harder and less comfortable than today. In this essay, I put forward a substantiated personal view that argues the life today has immense difficulties than before for several reasons.
To commnece with, people demands and
desire to get everything new in the advention assist in make them money lovers and in continuous search . Besides they always put higher goals to themselves which consequently harder to achieve. This play a pivotal role to achieve and fulfill their wants. For instance, the goals that my brother to hiself was very strict and hard to achieve. He set a goal to get new house, new car and build his own company. This effect his life dramatically and felt unhappy all his life.
Moreover, today people spends less time with their lovers and family and this put them in negative psychologically thinking about the darkness side of the life. For example, my cousin works everyday and even in the weekends. He try his best to collect money for his study trip to Russia. This effects him negatively and the less time he enjoy his life ensure him that this life worth nothing to live for. He try to succide once. When rescue by some friends. The doctors explain to him that he should put sceduale to himself and accordingly can mannage the time some for work and other for enjoyment. They told him, in the past the percentage of people thinking to sucide was less than 5% in comparism to recent decades which reach 69% duen to bad time planning.
IN CONCLUSION,
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...h reach 69% duen to bad time planning. IN CONCLUSION,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77707006369 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49816057299 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.466698853 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9473684211 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10837579867 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314836390704 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053341593493 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973532465517 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690139510824 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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