Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Since the beginning of this century, in all distinctive civilized societies, it has been a controversial argument among ordinary individuals or even intellectuals, through which numerous conflicts have been engendered. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that specialization is of more importance for people rather than knowing many academic subjects, while others consider this in a whole diverse perspective. Although an absolute conclusion cannot be made, in spite of all the opposite attitudes, I generally concur with the idea that associating academic subjects is a better education method rather than just majoring in one field. The outstanding reasons for my opinion would be explored below.
First and foremost, it is understood that specializing in one major is the most common approach to people, but I respectfully disagree and believe that life, itself, is a multi-dimensional issue, so people should be multi-dimensional also, in order to cope with their lives and improve them. For example, if one is majoring in mathematics, and lacks in social skills such as relationship psychology or the skill of presenting a good lecture, he/she will probably have so many dilemmas in terms of both relationships and other life issues. My point is, a mathematician who does not have knowledge about nothing but mathematics will not be able to found a family.
In addition to getting multi-dimensional, it enhances career opportunities for individuals. Nowadays, most of the companies are looking for people with great diversity in knowledge, because managers are utilitarian. In fact, whatever that would be able to increase the profit for the companies is more important for them. As a matter of fact, human resources are one of the most essential pillars of a company. One is to have more skills in order to get better job or get promoted. for instance, if one were a great project expert; however, he/she would not be able to describe the plan appropriately for his/her manager, he/she definitely would have so many troubles in his/her workplace.
Apart from the points that I have made above there is another reason that I would like to discuss about, and that is integrating different subjects, increases creativity. Knowing a broad variety of subjects helps people to think out of the box. From my personal experience, I can say that majoring in industrial engineering was so profitable for me. Because of the diversity of the subjects we learn not only are we able to think out of the box, but also we are able to find the optimum solution for every problem, which is the most fundamental purpose of our major.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I fundamentally agree with the statement that knowing a wide spectrum of knowledge is more beneficial for both individuals and societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208984375 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.154296875 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.099609375 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056640625 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.04296875 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.16015625 0.118717715034 135% => OK
Participles: 0.044921875 0.0351676179071 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.11047174351 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234375 0.0309702414327 76% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.087890625 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01953125 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0078125 0.0139019557991 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2840.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 461.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16052060738 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368763557484 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297180043384 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.234273318872 0.174417080927 134% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14967462039 0.112833075102 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11047174351 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540130151844 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 64.0923427649 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.6111111111 20.5533526081 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.438040826 48.84282405 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.777777778 120.699889404 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6111111111 20.5533526081 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.644075263715 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 55.3291154495 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.63076923077 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397341800246 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0770051326642 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0559922732803 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525378574972 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1775410328 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144967269989 0.114077575197 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611533596647 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325859683914 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0593612101433 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243097893586 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365288846169 0.0618886996521 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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