Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the development of technology, news is revealed around the world fast. TVs, newspapers, magazines, websites are different devices which facilitate news circulation. While some people believe that it is a good idea to stay away from news and enjoy the daily life, I am not convinced by this idea. From my vantage point, events from all around the world can affect our daily lives and we have to track them carefully.
Firstly, one of major issues of our daily life is economics' aspects. Families need to have enough money to survive. Therefore, economic situation of people is a significant facet which affects their everyday lives and they should trace the news. In addition, besides the need of tracking national events, individuals have to get information of worldwide news. For example, the issue of dormancy is an essential problem of some first-world countries. Since economics of each country is not an independent unit, people of other countries may expose to negative effects of dormancy in their daily life. For example, their salary would be decreased, as a reflection of problem in trading, or price of imported goods would become higher. Hence, it is essential that individuals track events of other countries to be aware of influences of events on their daily life and predict the conditions of their lives in the future.
In addition, some events have political effects on people's lives. In some countries government control everything in their societies. Therefore, rules that government legislated have substantial effect on individuals' lives. For example, if government confirms a rule that people cannot trade with a distinct country because of some political issues, trading companies would be threatened radically. Therefore, every-day lives of employees of these companies would be affected and it is so essential that they track these events and news to be ready in cope with these situations.
To conclude, it is undeniable that economics and politics are two significant resources which would influence people’s life. Therefore, events that reflect these resources are worthwhile to trace. Being aware of the things around us, would help us to be prepared against challenging situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...tical effects on peoples lives. In some countries government control everything in their ...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...are worthwhile to trace. Being aware of the things around us, would help us to be prepared against c...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277227722772 0.229887763892 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.141089108911 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0891089108911 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0247524752475 0.046263068375 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.049504950495 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141089108911 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0222772277228 0.0351676179071 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83434142861 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272277227723 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0717821782178 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0247524752475 0.0209618222197 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123762376238 0.0139019557991 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2239.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 354.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32485875706 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389830508475 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310734463277 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.248587570621 0.174417080927 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.183615819209 0.112833075102 163% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83434142861 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519774011299 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.5276584331 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2778245324 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.95 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.7734463277 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.04597701149 1.45489161554 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252572231015 0.300154397459 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117578860174 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0760109276824 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493808857783 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132576399242 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971421684263 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650979952777 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.289640386728 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0719873877483 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188638224602 0.210909579961 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579978865003 0.0618886996521 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.